Diary Entry 8 - 28th March

On monday, we had a rough cut deadline set. This meant by 5pm on Monday, all our work had to be added to the hard drive to be marked and analysed. After this was completed, we were asked to give peer feedback in one of the lessons for the class' work, so we could see people close to our target audience what they think of it and how i can change them. Then, I studied what advice I was given and wrote it all up and worked out which parts I would do for each section. I needed to retake some of my photos and some of the way it was organised didnt have the effect I wanted it to. So I planned how I would handle all of this and begin to complete it over the next two weeks.